#+SETUPFILE: ../../../template/level-2.org
#+TITLE: Rewrite the story
#+DATE: <2016-04-03 Sun 00:00>
#+AUTHOR: vaeringjar
#+EMAIL: vaeringjar@land
#+DESCRIPTION: Nerd happening here... analysis of Star Wars.
#+KEYWORDS: pop movies critique

* Problems in general

These problems have no specific relation with the stories.

- Slavery of the jedi, clones, and droids
- Racism against non-humans, particularly wookies, droids
- Sexism against women, and non-male genders
- The idea we need an elite warrior class to maintain peace

* Problems with the prequels

- The way they pronounce Coruscant...
- Midichlorians...
- Padawans...
- Changed the story that Yoda taught Ben by adding Quigon.
- Changed the story that Ben took on Anakin.
- Never explains how Ben doesn't remember ever owning R2D2, but then
  he does at the very least know R2 and 3po, and also probably own R4
  or whoever.
- The idea that Anakin's mom had no lover and furthermore that the
  Emperor could have raped her.
- Leia claims she remembers her mother, even though Ben calls them
  twins. But Padme dies right after their birth.

Presented problems with Anakin and Luke having the same last name and
growing up on the same planet.

1. Anakin should have had a different last name because everyone would
   have known him as one of the most famous jedi before he turned into
   Darth Vader. When Luke rescues Leia and introduces himself with the
   same last name as Anakin, Leia would have called him much more than
   short for a stormtrooper. Unless the family name of Skywalker is as
   common as Anderson on Tattooine.
1. Conversely, Ben says Anakin was "killed by Darth Vader who was a
   pupil of mine until he turned to evil". That works for Luke, but
   the rest of the galaxy would remember the hero who went
   crazy. However, even by fooling just Luke, that would not protect
   Luke from the person they meant to hide him from in the first
   place. Even Yoda keeps it from Luke, in the verification reveil
   before he dies.
1. The Emperor calls Luke, the son of Skywalker when talking to Vader,
   even though we know Skywalker and Vader mean the same person (later
   in the movie). The only in-universe explanation would mean there
   was some coverup that both the Emperor and Ben persist in their
   stories, though the Emperor would not need to do this for Vader
   except for out-of-universe reasons of preserving the climax reveil
   to Luke at Cloud City.

* Notes from the originals
"Do not underestimate the powers of the Emperor, or else suffer your
father's fate you will." -Yoda

"When I first knew him, your father was already a great pilot." -Ben

"To protect you both from the Emperor, you were hidden from your
father when you were born." -Ben, explains in passive voice either to
remove responsibility from himself or to hide something else from Luke

"You don't know the power of the dark side. I must obey my master."
-Vader

* Fixes for the prequels
Should have reveiled
- Anakin became Darth Vader hunted down the jedi for a just reason
- Vader eventually falls under the control of the Emperor

The just reason
- The ending of slavery of the droids upon realization that some of
  them are truly sentient and can use the force
- The jedi, slaves themselves, only perpetuated slavery

Remove and avoid R2, 3po, and Quigon at all for the sake of
continuity.  Give Anakin a different last name or create some way to
mend at least the latter two examples of Ben and the Emperor
persisting the idea that Vader and Anakin Skywalker mean two different
people.  Make Anakin and Ben good friends.

* Define the protagonist

** Option 1: Ben
This way, Ben can become friends with Anakin, train him, and have his
own adventure that evetually crosses paths with or completely ends in
the conflict between the two. Anakin does not need to be in the entire
story.

*** Ben trains Anakin, version 1
Perhaps Ben joined the jedi long ago. Then one day he takes a
bus/transport vessel somewhere, driven/flown by Anakin. Something bad
happens, and both Ben and Anakin save everyone using inate force
talents. Ben decides to train Anakin before he goes back to work. In
the originals, the training happens quickly for the talented users, so
they only need a short time. Ben points Anakin to the jedi membership
hiring hall, and they part ways.

**** Variations
Examples
- Both Ben and Anakin have already enlisted to fight in the clone
  wars. They meet on Victory day. Anakin flies a bus. Terrorists
  attack the bus.

Variations elements
- When in relation to the clone wars
- Their destination
- Who attacks to the bus

*** The just reason
After the clone wars, many of the droids go to a distance solar system
to retire. However, the masters don't understand or know this. They
think someone has stolen their property. The republic asks the jedi to
investigate, along with Anakin. Either by miscommmunication, mind
control, or their own corruption, the jedi decide to ignore the droids
and force them back to their masters. However, Anakin defends the
droids and kills all of the other relentless jedi in the process.


** Option 2: Anakin
This would require a more mature plot developed around Anakin's
motives for hunting down the jedi and joining the dark side.


** Option 3: Someone else, possibly Leia and Luke's mother
Using some completely different character opens up many possibilities,
including a purely tragic story of betrayal if this person belongs to
the jedi.


* Define the plot
http://www.how-to-write-a-book-now.com/basic-plots.html
